The Hawk Bathroom
This is coming to You
through an acid-free page
from My Black-bound
Journal
written with My Birks
Silver Pen
announcing The Arrival
of My Blond Bomb Shell
Daughter I Made Up
appearing at My Bathroom Door
with a favourite knitted scarf
over Her Head
announcing to The Mirror
“I Am Dressed
Like A Muslim Woman.”
Joanna Hyde November 30th, 2011
Joanna, your poems tell a story – individually and as a collection. I love how the pieces come together.
Thank you, Jackie. I wonder when and how my Story/Book will come out!
a poem with a wow factor, the ending lines are great. I did not see that coming when I started reading. Ciao, Francina
Thank you, Francina. I wondered if anyone would have that reaction at the end, and did you get the allusions leading up to it?
I see the allusions now Joanna! You are a very clever writer and I continue to learn from you.
I have the most odd picture stuck in my mind
as a result of this,
it is unexplainable
in words.